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Baron von Lexus · 05-01-2008

Colour - 9 (seems a bit chalky if you know what I mean.)
Base - 9.5
Atmosphere - 9
Technique - 9
Overall Skill - 9.5
Unit Cohesion - 10
Your Comments - Fantastic entry, I was about to give you all 10's but I'm a jerk and will try to come up with some justification why I didnt instead. Theres always something more you can do and while I cant totally put my finger on it The color almost seems to crisp and chalky. The sense of rotting zombie marines is great but I just think you could have done some tiny thing to make them better. The faces might have been toned down a bit and defined b/c they sort of blend into the helmets. I'm being really particular but I think It'll help you out. Superb entry and just trying to add some constructive criticism to make it even better.

BvL

05-01-2008	#6 (permalink)
Baron von Lexus Marshall Arnim Kagori Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Ohio, still waiting for a GW Store. Posts: 1,596 Rep Power: 2 Thanks: 124 Thanked 143 Times in 104 Posts	Re: Final Entry ....... Prince of the night. Colour - 9 (seems a bit chalky if you know what I mean.) Base - 9.5 Atmosphere - 9 Technique - 9 Overall Skill - 9.5 Unit Cohesion - 10 Your Comments - Fantastic entry, I was about to give you all 10's but I'm a jerk and will try to come up with some justification why I didnt instead. Theres always something more you can do and while I cant totally put my finger on it The color almost seems to crisp and chalky. The sense of rotting zombie marines is great but I just think you could have done some tiny thing to make them better. The faces might have been toned down a bit and defined b/c they sort of blend into the helmets. I'm being really particular but I think It'll help you out. Superb entry and just trying to add some constructive criticism to make it even better. BvL __________________ Self-Proclaimed Resident Krieg Expert "The Krieg method of war is a measure of thier discipline and thier sacrifice. It demands respect from all - friend and foe alike." -Lord Commander Militant, Segmentum Obscurus Be Professional! Tutorials: Vehicle Camoflauge Weathering WIP Death Korps of Krieg + History of Valdenheim + Krieg Librarium Article Those are my models in my sig.