Well, it doesn't look too bad. Gear-wise, the only really glaring weakness is the lack of an invulnerable save. The storm bolter isn't optimal for assault strenght, but it doesn't prevent him from assaulting when he shoots it either, and it's a far better gun than a bolt pistol, so that probably evens out. The power weapon is better for him that the power fist, not quite as good as the L-claw, but cheaper and easier to paint.
Speaking of paint, your paint job isn't bad. The one thing I'd suggest doing differently would be to paint ropes across his chest a different color than his chest eagle (and maybe not a metallic color). Also, like the other fellows say, red is damn hard to paint over black primer (and white primer too, for that matter). When I paint over black primer, I find that blues, browns, greens, and metallics paint better than reds and yellows. |