The plot thickens... good job Inquisitor!
As to why this differs to how I've seen you write before. I haven't seen you create long conversations, or put in a sense of mystery. Also, it's new to me to see you put in more depth to the characters, and their emotions. It's really good, and perfectly fits this story. I'm really enjoying this so far!
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