Okay, that helps.
I don't play BT, but I've glanced at their codex and they seem pretty similar to normal SM, so here it goes.
I'd say, that, for a squad of ten single wound models, even with all their kicka** upgrades, the termie honored furious charging Sword Brethern are WAY to expensive, if you can, replace them with a normal Termie squad and a Heavy Flamer, and then deepstrike them. (I'm think of like a 8 man termie squad).
Also, the Dreadnought... simply put WTF!!! Heavy flamer AND lascannon???? That's my take at least... I think the best Dreads are just cheap normal dreads with extra armor... 110 points and a pretty balanced unit.
The ccw squad needs a rhino, as perhaps one of the other squads, either that or you need to make them smaller.
Also, you only really have 2 tank-hunting units... one of which is a fire magnet (dread). You may want to get some melta guns, or perhaps a Sword Brethern squad with tank hunters (can you do that?).
And have you considered giving your HQ's command squads? Or do they just run around wild by themselves?
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