well, if you put an IC in with the infiltrating sword brethren squad, then they can no longer infiltrate...
also, any time reserves/escalation are in play your hq's are likely fethed because they'll likely come into play at different times than the squad/s you want them to run with!
finally, lose the artificer armour as, as pointed out above you'll hardly ever get the better save what with 'mixed armour', ap2 weapons and special close combat attacks!
lose the termie honours on the one SB squad and add some neophytes for added numbers, especially in your main assaulty templar squad!
i'd also define the pred a bit better... right now it's got 3 'main' weapons meanign if it moves it gets upto 2 shots max with the autocannon! either make it a proper annhilator or else go for heavy bolter sponsons and drive it up with your infantry!!! (8 ap4 shots/turn is very scary!)
cheers!
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