HQ=fine. im pretty sure you cant add furious charge for techmarine, even with scions of mars.
Elites:
dreadnaught-fine
techmarine-very cool and fluffy. any vehicle is pretty much gonna get fixed, and you do have alot of em so its worth it
Terminator Assault Squad-so evil...mwahahahhahaaa
Troops
Scout Squad:fine
Scout Squad: 158 pts.
i say leave it as it is. its a close combat scout squad, you want it to have a seargent with a P.fist or P.weapon. why wouldnt you? add bionics
Tactical Squad 1:
DONT drop T.honors and bionics, DO drop P.fist. this applies to all tac squads. this is for fluff reasons, correct? if so, i dont see why not. however, the power fists would probrobly get wasted.
Tactical Squad 2:
DONT put a lascannon. lascannons get wasted in tac squads. plasma cannon is fine.
Tactical Squad 3:
heavy bolter is fine. disagree w/ u again r4wr
Tactical Squad 4:
fine
Fast Attack
Land Speeder Squadron:
i agree w/ r4wr. 3 squads of one is much more flexible, and they dont all have to be set up all at once =D
Assault Squad (for the Iron Father): GODLY. though broodlord w/ retinue would pwn them still ;D
Heavy Support
Predator Annihilator: watch out infantry
Dreadnought: fine. be sure not to drop him in front of some lascannons
Devastator Squad: nice. lots of bodies as padding for HW troops, though i would drop the PW. y doesnt this guy have bionics though? also, wouldnt lascannons be a better choice for these? you dont seem to have alot of anti-tank in this, exept for the venerable dread. you could consider adding lascannons on the razorback.
as this list is mainly for fluff (isnt it?) i can see why you would keep in the bionics n stuff. lascannons on tac squads is not very effective at all. the las will want to shoot at the tanks while wasting the effectiveness of the rest of the squad. plasma guns isnt a bad idea though. missle launchers are the best heavy weapon to give tac squads however.
btw erus grats on the promotion ;D