I discovered some grammatical and wording errors in one of the paragraphs and so i have edited them. It was more specifically the part about horus appointing sanguinius as the warmaster if he were to have died on Davin. I just fixed the wording a bit!
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"Your duty to House Kurita comes first in life. Duty and Honor my brothers. Remember that, Duty and Honor." Lord General Israfael Kurita before battle against Clan Ghost Bear, 3060