Very good...still a few word misusages but nothing that really takes away from the jist of the story...
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Originally Posted by Dan296  “Inquisitor? Lord Inquisitor, are you awake?” Malekai awoke looking into the face of death. He startled and almost fell off of the bead... |
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We can move her if we had a vehicle, but all of yours were destroyed by the traitors and we cannot land any of our heavies.
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tense stuff really...but you didn't mis spell anything...
Please continue...I am enjoying this immensly...Inquisitors and SM and nuns with guns...oh my....
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I am Wolfpack, my fangs are long, my hair grey with age...I am The Great Wolf...I fight with bolter and Axe, my armies vast, my word final. A true son of Russ, my honor above all, I hunt the heretic, the xenos, and the witch and slay them where they stand! My sons hunt our enemies,
slay them where they falter and bring their pelts to Fenris