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Old 08-06-2007   #2 (permalink)
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Just a couple of observations:
1) Praetorinas are an honor guard type of unit. I don't see the Imperium using it as a traitorous term. Did you mean Excoomunicate Traitorus? If so, that would be the status of the chapter and wouold interfere in your fluff as you have they are renown for their stores of knowledge.

2.) The High Lords and Inquistion determine the status of traitors. However, the Adeptus Mechanicus does have a seat on the council of the High Lords. You could still use this in your background, but just tweak it a little and then have the Adpetus Mechanicus pull all support from the chapter. This would mean little to no terminator and/or artificer armor, techmarines, and dreadnoughts. This is a very characterful approach. Where will you army turn for help in keeping their equipment running?

3.) There is a contridiction in your rules and fluff. If the Adeptus Mechanicus have pulled support thing s like dreadnoughts would be a small number. The Heed the Wisdom of the Ancients would go against this piece of fluff by alolowing the feilding of up to 6 of these machines. If you areookin for heavy kit, you may want to try Honour Your Wargear and feild Devastators instead. More shots and models Vs. vehcile armor and rules.

You have a very good start. The ideas are ther and just need alittle fleshing out. Have you given thought to you color scheme? Could be some useful stuff coming from just that and your actual playing style on the board. If you have any need of assistance please ask and I'll do my best to help out.
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