hm, an offensive against the Tyranids, eh? I think only the Ultramarines have ever pulled this off successfully, to my knowledge.
Good story! I like how you explored the possible reasons for an astroparth burn-out. I didn't know about the two other than Tyranids.
And just out of curiosity, what does Tentatio Proditor mean?
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