nice, simple and easy to follow layout!
the one thing that's still missing though is the one big weakness of the fish of fury; enemy deep strikers!
generally to ensure the enemy can't lap around your transports, most of your tau are huddled together as a rather tempting target for templates - namely flamers and heavy flamers! (and the odd hellhound inferno cannon)
i've sucessfully broken the FoF more than once by landing a single sentinel with heavy flamer behind the formation and roasting whole squads... granted many guard players really do neglect this valuable tactic of a 40-55pts throw-away unit, but still, i think it bares mention that there are a few units out there who will thrash you badly if you're not careful!
again though, overall a really great & informative article!
cheers!