Probably just my eyes, been working a lot on a secret project.
Now that I read it, I think it is nice. I would change Exilites to something else, as it is cumbersome on the tongue/innenr voice, but thats just me.
__________________  "Truth is infinite. It is defined by our perception of the facts; therefore we can never know absolute truth, we can only guess at it. A man who knows he has done no wrong needs no redemption, regardless of the views of others. The truth is what he believes it to be. A man who knows he has done wrong can only be redeemed when he chooses to forgive himself."
-Lord Inquisitor Balkoth
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