I like it...a bit short in the tooth, but then again direct and not too divulgent...they are a mystery after all, if I am reading it correctly...
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I am Wolfpack, my fangs are long, my hair grey with age...I am The Great Wolf...I fight with bolter and Axe, my armies vast, my word final. A true son of Russ, my honor above all, I hunt the heretic, the xenos, and the witch and slay them where they stand! My sons hunt our enemies,
slay them where they falter and bring their pelts to Fenris