this sounds very cool. the tail of a wrongly dishonoured chapter just trying to survive in a hostile universe. even if you do end up lifting the sanction against them they will still be viewed with mistrust and susspicion.
i like the idea of the corrupt inquisitor puttin the whammy on them, thats a nice touch. i'm temted to say kill off the inquisitor before they can clear their name, and then have the chapter seek vengance on the inquisition as a whole. that would be an impossible task but a cool twist. |