Good job! I'm still a bit off keel from the camping, so i'll post some suggestions and such later, but it looks good from a quick scan!
__________________  "Men are haunted by the vastness of eternity. And so we ask ourselves: will our actions echo across the centuries? Will strangers hear our names long after we are gone, and wonder who we were, how bravely we fought, how fiercely we loved?" - Odyseeus (Troy - 2004)
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