I'd drop the 'uphold the honor' for 'cleanse and purify' or 'honor your wargear'. Those are better traits for a shooty army, imho. 'purity above' and 'cleanse & purify' together make a DEADLY army when combined with drop pods or used with foot sloggers. It's actually a fairly popular tourney list. I'll see if I can dig one of the ones I used a while back.
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-Lord Inquisitor Balkoth
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