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Ides · 01-23-2008

Too tall even to ducked into the medicae

Since you mention him smashing into the medicae immediately afterwards, I'd try for a different wording here...

edit: that's all I can see in the triangulum thread for the minute. I'll go back to the original thread for the rest.

01-23-2008	#22 (permalink)
Ides Lieutenant Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Ireland Posts: 1,096 Rep Power: 3 Thanks: 19 Thanked 49 Times in 47 Posts Blog Entries: 4	Re: Help with the Novellette Too tall even to ducked into the medicae Since you mention him smashing into the medicae immediately afterwards, I'd try for a different wording here... edit: that's all I can see in the triangulum thread for the minute. I'll go back to the original thread for the rest. __________________ The opinions posted above are solely the property of the Ides account and are in no way representative of those views held by the staff of this forum. For sale: One soul. Mint Condition, never been used. Last edited by Ides; 01-23-2008 at 08:18 AM.