[Zeb[edee]]

Well i think you should change Autocannon to Reapear Autocannon to save any confusion. Apart from that, I like it. Only thing i would say is that you have No fast attack which means your relying on the CSM's to make it to the other side in a tank. Which normally gets shot at a lot. I would say lose a unit of havocs perhaps and take some Bikers/Raptors. And if you are taking out one unit of havocs maybe make the other one more specialized to taking out tanks as the rest of the army is quite capable of taking out infantry.

Or if you do keep both Havoc squads perhaps specialize each one anyway. Have one uber anti-tank one and another tooled up to get out a lot of shots vs Infantry