 Re: calm before the storm.
Very ncie, good work Marcus.
but, one or two crtiques.
1: it was too short?! write the rest! its a good start, where are you going to go with it?
2: describe the overall landscape, not just the position in which the paladins position. EG: what colour is the sky? what is the weather like? is it a desert planet? is it raining? is it muddy? that kind of thing.
keep it up marcus.
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