[Drax]

those herds are way too large - i would work on the basis of 8 Gors and 13 ungors if you want large units, anything more becomes a bit unwieldy

bulk up the Besti/Khorngors more - 20 - 25 minimum i think just because they aren't as manuevrable as the herds and may take the wounds first

taking a few hounds may prove a distraction and could add a few extra kills just when you need them - 5 hounds is the same cost as 6 ungors with shields so isn't that bad.

i shall have to check my books tonight on the magic items but initially you cannot have both the coller of khorne and the horn of the great hunt on the beast lord - i cant remember if the coller counts as a talisman, in which case you therefore have 2 which is illegal, or it is an enchanted item, and beasts cannot have enchanted items. plus with the scimitar, i still think a great weapon would be better

presumably you still only have one chariot because you only own one chariot?