[lynxrpken]

um not to be mean and dont take this the wrong way but this needs to be in fluff and fan fiction.

I might get into next if I where you a more spsific detailed origen on you leader and his staff and the commissar ( if you have one ). move through the army list and tell how everything happend to make the fighting force what it currently is. ( I have not done this yet for my army either ). but for my other one I did and it makes it feel more like real life and a relationship with the units on a indivedual basis if you know there history and more about each one. it adds a whole different level to the game when this is done for me at least.

other than that the general backroung for the army is very well written and there is no conflict with existing and widly accepted fluff. GREAT JOB