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09-02-2007
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| Lieutenant    Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Im not entirely sure. I think im stuck inside an alternate reality where im blue and the sky is me.
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Blog Entries: 1  |  Choices "In this world, there exists a balance between those who are creators and those who are users. And if it were to break, then the world you have come to know, love, cherish, would be gone. Your every action, would cause another terrible reaction, no matter where, no matter when. And there would be nothing you can do to stop it. Danger and Death would lurk behind every corner, in every crack and crevice, staring at you from every window. To even get your food would be a battle for survival, as others would desperately try to kill you, just for a small scrap. Disease and famine, would spread across the world, and if you hadn't died yet, then it would only be a matter of time. You could not escape, you could not run or hide." "I present you, with two paths, one of which you must walk down. The right, will take you back to your world, normal, as you know it. However this path, will cause your death, a self sacrifice to save the people and places you love. They will not suffer, and you will watch the world go on, happily, as it is. The left path, will leave you, great and unquestioned leader of a dieing and decaying world, sitting immortally upon your throne, the power to save your family and friends from the death that spreads everywhere like a plague, reaping the lives of innocent people, scratching for a way out." "The Choice, is yours."
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09-02-2007
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| being a father and husband its a nobrainer the path on the right i sacrafice every day for my family any other answer is just plain WRONG
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| Lieutenant Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Im not entirely sure. I think im stuck inside an alternate reality where im blue and the sky is me.
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Blog Entries: 1 | It's SUPPOSED to be wrong, for the storyline purposes? (Me and a friend are fitting this into a larger plot)
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09-04-2007
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| First Chaplain    Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Louisville, KY
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Blog Entries: 5 | I like the dynamics, but i'd like to see this further developed. Good potential.
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 | I find it extremely creepy that I am currently watching "The Matrix" and reading this. It has the exact same feel to it: choosing two paths/blue pill or red pill. One leave the world as it is, one alters you forever. Like Erus, I am interested in where this is going.
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09-04-2007
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| Lieutenant Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Im not entirely sure. I think im stuck inside an alternate reality where im blue and the sky is me.
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Blog Entries: 1 | The story itself has two paths, except its going down both. =p I'm writing a full story with it, meanwhile me and a friend are also going to stick it in a Starcraft 2 RPG. =p
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