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Old 04-12-2007   #1 (permalink)
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Now this is way off in the future but I am currently writing a short story about a young interrogator basically on a last solo training mission to become a full inquisitor, and as you know to become one, you need the approval of other inquisitors, and since I don't feel like creating names for occasional characters, I wanted to ask you terrans if you'd like to have your inquisitors mentioned in my short story. There will only be a couple requirements so I can best depict your inquisitor(maybe even their interrogators?).

1. Name(duh)
2. Personality
3. Beliefs(xanthist momothiest ect...)

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1. Name(duh) Inquisitor Lord Asireloth Du Taliwein (Du Taliwein stands for the fact that he has bonded what amounts to an entire population of a feral tribe of warriors to him by saving them from the other tribes whilst pursuing a trace of a powerful warp-artifact).
2. Personality Moody. Noted from being quiet and contemplating, then bursting into fits of rage and depression. Also note for a smile that never seems to reach his eyes.
3. Beliefs(xanthist momothiest ect...) Horusian.
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1. Name(duh) Inquisitor Lord Asireloth Du Taliwein (Du Taliwein stands for the fact that he has bonded what amounts to an entire population of a feral tribe of warriors to him by saving them from the other tribes whilst pursuing a trace of a powerful warp-artifact).
2. Personality Moody. Noted from being quiet and contemplating, then bursting into fits of rage and depression. Also note for a smile that never seems to reach his eyes.
3. Beliefs(xanthist momothiest ect...) Horusian.
Neat. He will be the one that is suspicious of mi character....or something..
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Neat. He will be the one that is suspicious of mi character....or something..
Nice... Just to check, as I think most don't know, you do know the beliefs of the Horusians, right? Some people thought that the faction thought Horus was the Emperor, but Wiki has the right of it. Just lemme know if you have any questions on looks (equipment/weapon/retinue wise). I haven't developed the two Interrogators he has yet. Damn lazy-ness for writing.
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You are welcome to incorporate:

Inquisitor Carwyn Machenhael (the one I made up from the Acheron Campaign), Ordo Hereticus

Pesonality: commanding, bold, frank, dry wit (he regularly calls upon the Space Marines of the Iron Lords, who normally willingly and quickly respond to his requests).

Beliefs: Alamathian, but he is not afraid to use his power as an Inquisitor and as evidenced by his frequent requests to the Adeptus Astartes, and will usually use a bit more force than is necessary to bring down cults and supress uprisings, which are usually followed by purgings. He does, however, see psykers as valuable, if they can be controlled and properly contained, unlike Monodominants, who would kill all Navigators, Astropaths, etc. if they had their way.
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1. Name: Inquisitor Jessibel Kurapov

2. Personality: Keeps quite until something interests her, then she won't let anyone else get a word in. Only respects those who she has worked with and have proven themselves, and those who her mentor, Inquisitor Jan Kruml, vouched for when she was an interregator.
Openly insubordinate to her superiors and simply insulting to those who she thinks aren't pure...An attitude only tolerated because of her mentors reputation and influence.
Prefers close combat with two single-bladed daggers and always carries dozens of razors and other sharp objects concealed on her.

3. Beliefs: Amalathian with a Monodominant streak...She knows it's best to take things easy and not make a scene but when it's better/easier or simply more fun she won't hesitate to call in a lance strike

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An Interregator needs the approval of 3 Inquisitors or one lord to be promoted, having a lord as well as 2 other Inquisitors is pointless.
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An Interregator needs the approval of 3 Inquisitors or one lord to be promoted, having a lord as well as 2 other Inquisitors is pointless.[/quote]

Right... Well, being as the fluff isn't done, and you haven't read it, please don't call it pointless. The Interrogators are there for a reason. You'll know why when I post the fluff. For now, say they are conduits.

If nothing else, he's a dirt filthy radical hiding out from the rest of the Inquisition on a feral world. He bends the rules. (My favorite phrase when someone says something is pointless or dosen't make sense: "It's Chaos, it doesn't have to make sense!").
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1. Name; inquisitor odion

2. Personality; a sinister, brooding man who carries a grudge against most of his brethren.
subtle, yet quick to anger he's not a very nice fellow to get on the wrong side of!

3. Beliefs(xanthist momothiest ect...); istvaanian/chaotician.

odion is a product of his mentor the heretic inquisitor lichtenstien. thus odion believes that chaos can be used and turned against itself. while he hasn't sliped to such depths as creating a daemonhost, he does carry a daemonic weapon gifted to him by lichtenstien.
rummors say that he is trying to reconcile with his former mentor after many of the puritan faction, namely the monodominants, delcaired him 'guilty by association' after lichtenstien's actions were brought to attention.

currently odion's whereabouts are unknown, though he is known to have reached an 'understanding' with the lodis 13th imperial guard regiment and the suspect bearers of dark knowledge space marine chapter.

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Thanks all for the Inquisitors! If you wanna post slightly more detailed descriptions about their look(clothing weapons, eye color hair etc...) that'd also be great.
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1. Name; Inquisitor Lord Vahn'diem Wulfric Reg'nier

2. Personality; Stern, yet possessed of a sombre kind of zealous rage. A former Captain and Hero of the Stone Dragons, Vahn abhors all forms of cybernetic enhancement viewing a much purer form of evolution in the Tyranid biomorphs, but as with daemons, he will use them if he deems it prudent.

3. Beliefs(xanthist momothiest ect...); Thorianist, Horusian. Puritan, Radical...traitor...all are useful masks, and he is not afraid to switch between them at his own discretion. Though his main duties are with the Ordo Mallius, he has lead more than few purges by the Ordo Xenos. Regularly makes contact with the Ides of Oryn, a Warband composed of "Fallen" dark angels and former black legionnaires, and the Stone Dragons Space Marine chapter.

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A former captain of the Stone Dragons, he is a monolithic figure with greying black hair and a cold, emerald gaze. His most notable feature is a collection of jagged acid burns that run diagonally left to right across his face, marking his last encounter with a Carnifex.

Armed with a force-halberd, he also possesses a Dark-Blade, gifted to him by rogue black legionnaire and now dead daemon-prince Oryn Ides. Equally at ease plotting from a distance as he is tearing through hordes of Daemons, he often takes to the field in black and grey power armour where discretion is not an issue.

More often than not, his expressions are unreadable, but he has been noted for an unsettling gaze and disturbing smile. His voice was once described as a disturbing union between gravel and a thunderstorm.
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Wow...sure are a lot of radicals and filthy traitors out there.

Aren't grey knights in the chapter for life, and possesed with an unimagineable hatred for all things traitor, daemonic and heretic and would rather die along with tens of thousands of innocent people then to see so much as a single daemonic entity exist in real-space. And don't they train for hours every day to maintain their purity against the entities they have to do battle with.
Sorry Ides...as far as I can tell your character has no traits that mark out anything even remotely like a grey knight.
He reminds me more of someone along the lines of Quixos.
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Wow...sure are a lot of radicals and filthy traitors out there.

Aren't grey knights in the chapter for life, and possesed with an unimagineable hatred for all things traitor, daemonic and heretic and would rather die along with tens of thousands of innocent people then to see so much as a single daemonic entity exist in real-space. And don't they train for hours every day to maintain their purity against the entities they have to do battle with.
Sorry Ides...as far as I can tell your character has no traits that mark out anything even remotely like a grey knight.
He reminds me more of someone along the lines of Quixos.
I have to agree with Stubber. Grey Knights are indeed sworn for life. A Grey Knight would not use any daemonic device. In the game, you can't field Grey Knights if you use a daemonhost. That's the kind of thing an Inquisitor would get killed by Grey Knights for...
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Okey doke...replace grey knights with space marine chapter name and all be sorted.

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Asireloth:

His appearance is a long, deep cobalt and ice white trimmed robe. His left arm is an advanced graft/mutation of a psycannon/arm. On the pacification of Xirar VII, Asireloth lost his arm in a horrific explosion that fused the bones of his arm and his trusted psycannon. Rather than loose the arm, the Adeptus Mechanicus traveling with the Inquisitor Lord, combined with chirugeons and other skilled medicae personel, spliced and grafted the arm until it function as both arm and cannon. The firing mechanism, cunningly concealed in his palm by a set of hidden metal plates covered in synth-skin, often gives off the impression of his entire arm being consumed in a hellish blue-white white before he releases the charge.

He is also noted for wearing a suit of matte black power armor with no adornments other than an ornate inquistorial symbol on the shoulder that is done in the clashing blue and white color of his cloak, as well as his shaved head, which is tattooed with ritualistic runes of the feral world of his birth.

His weapon of choice is a might force sword that stands nearly to his own chest, adorned with a single skull at the pommel, and twisted looking runes that might have once been of Eldar origin, although their sickly light show they are something else now. Perhaps the only normal features of the man are his eyes, a simple green, which rarely ever blink.

The interrogators are rarely seen by anyone but Asireloth, and when they are they appear in white bodygloves with ceramite armor plates of the same blue as their masters cloak. Each also wears a black mask of some unknown, stretch like fabric that reveals little beyond the fact that they are human, with no obvious mutations. Each also bears a wickedly curved short sword, and a silenced and scoped bolt pistol of unknown make, engraved not with an Aquila or Inquisitorial rosette symbol, but rather the personal rune mark of their master.
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Okay. I started the story.

Now I wait till' I run out of ideas...
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Now this is way off in the future but I am currently writing a short story about a young interrogator basically on a last solo training mission to become a full inquisitor, and as you know to become one, you need the approval of other inquisitors, and since I don't feel like creating names for occasional characters, I wanted to ask you terrans if you'd like to have your inquisitors mentioned in my short story. There will only be a couple requirements so I can best depict your inquisitor(maybe even their interrogators?).

1. Name(duh)
2. Personality
3. Beliefs(xanthist momothiest ect...)

thats it folks....

hmm...this post was a while back, but if it's not too late... :]

inquisitor kasparoff [yes, named after a serious memory disorder you can get with chronic alcoholism, learned that in psych! haha]

Deeply bound to fighting daemons, his approach to all battle is the same: [to put it lightly] kill small daemons with big guns, kill bigger daemons with bigger guns. i only put it that way because i can't think of how else to say it. While many inquisitors pride themselves on their powerful psychic abilities, Kasparoff prefers the art of warfare in a more physical sense. He wields an ancient psycannon, with his chainsword strapped to the bottom for quick melee attacking.

in terms of personality, he is generally seen as more lenient than most other inquisitors. while he doesn't use daemonhosts, he knows their raw potential and often commends their use. he is also known to have encouraged the use of chaotic or xenos weaponry in the heat of battle, most famously for the dark blades Brother-Captain Anselm wields, of the night hunters space marines. His presence among the hunters has also brought tau weaponry among the space marine ranks.

beliefs: [and it took me a while to decide] while kasparoff encourages unity among imperial forces, he is still largely seen as "radical" and is therefore a follower of Xanthism. Tinges of Istvaanism have been known to streak out of the seasoned inquisitor, but only rarely, in the form of striving to lead imperial forces into the fiercest of battles, and suggesting daring tactics and exercising extreme martial pride in battle.

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Inquisitor Artemis

Artemis is a lively woman, born on the planet Caspia, out on the Western Fringe. She is often seen wearing a broad grin on her face, and loves music, dancing, and gambling. Her easygoing attitude is somewhat out of place in the Ordo Hereticus. Her demeanour changes considerably in the interrogation chambers, where she will calmly put a heretic through the most excruciating tortures imaginable. She is a consumate bladed weapons fighter, favouring knives over all other weapons.

Artemis is a follower of the Recongregator philosophy, she seeks to destabilise the status quo where she finds it lacking. She has actively sponsored several anti-Imperial cults on various planets, using them to tear down corrupt or incompetant leaders, then eradicating the heretics utterly, and covertly installing a fitting candidate of her own. Her methods have brought her into conflict with Almathian Inquisitors repeatadly, including her long-time foe, Inquisitor Kith.

Artemis is tall, with the long, fair hair and startling green eyes common to the people of Caspia. Her garb is usually simple, and somewhat mannish. She dresses in a long, red coat, simple fatigues, and wears the broad-brimmed hat favoured by her order. She wears knee-high boots, and long, tight gloves that almost extend to her elbows.

Underneath the coat she wears a flexible layer of arma-plas plates that affords her the protection of carapace armour, while allowing her to make the quick movements required of a knife-fighter.

Significant portions of her lower body are augmentic, after she was disembowled by the Almathian Inquisitor Kith when they crossed paths eradicating a death cult on Despard VII. The bionics have replaced most of her digestive system, including her intestines, liver, and stomach.

She has a dazzling array of knives and long daggers hidden in her sleeves, her boots, the lining of her coat, and a even pair of thin blades which she uses as hairpins. She wears a bolt pistol on either hip, each carrying psycannon rounds that Artemis made has herself.

Edit: It would appear I have the only female Inquisitor.
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