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| Corporal ![]() ![]() | DeAd_cOmMaNdO... Thank you. Ok, Lets go! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Not quite finished, but I'd like to give you all an idea so that I can improve. Give me some Constructive Criticism!
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Blog Entries: 4 | when constructing the upper legs I'd reccommend smoothing over the side tassets if at all possible. other than that its all good.
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Blog Entries: 1 | rofl, dead commando strikes again ![]() i'm with ides on this one, the upper legs look a little spindly. other than that it look awesome. the chest and face plate in particular are well done, and kudos for the reconstructed trigger finger! one last thing...maybe up the base size?
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| Corporal ![]() ![]() | If there is something wrong with the upper legs (And other people I've asked who have seen it in real life have said the opposite) I know what it is. I may have spaced the legs a little too far.
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Blog Entries: 1 | check the thickness of the thigh against the thickness of the upper arm, from where i sit the don't look too dis-similar.
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Blog Entries: 1 | Looks good man. I love Plague Marines, so I'll be watching this thread like a hawk. By the way, are these Pre-heresy?
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| Corporal ![]() ![]() | Indeed they are, so no Plague Marines for you I'm afraid.
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Blog Entries: 3 | Looking good so far.. The legs on the top could use tome bulking, and maybe less bulking on the lower legs next time. Just have to see where you go concerning the top. Over all, i'd extend the PC strip all the way down the chain sword, and make the other shoulder pad plated like the one w/ GS. Nice helmet sculpting too. What was your base head there? I suggest tackling Iron Armor/MKIII for your next one.. Death Guard look amazing in it!
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Blog Entries: 3 | I noticed that bit! Hence why I was pointing out what I saw, to make sure it wasn't something you would miss after completion and have to go back and retroactively fix. Always easier to fix and finish in the beginning rather than the end after it all!
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Blog Entries: 1 | hey nanolathe, looks good dude. C&C - - i'm with the others on the upper legs. you dont neccissarily need to go over the hip pads but layered up to them should be sufficient. - also same with erus on the sword. looks kinda off with the pc just on part. making it full length will also improve the feel of it being larger. - on the left arm are you gonna tie the power cord into something? looks unnecessary if you're aren't gonna hook it to anything. i'd probably cut it off myself. seriously does look good dude. really like the chest work and that skull not to mention that face plate. keep up the pics on this work!
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Blog Entries: 4 | Very nice, I'm always astounded when I see good greenstuff work. I can never do anything as good as that, especially the smooth sharp angles and the details.
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| Corporal ![]() ![]() | Ok everyone, stop telling me about the sword. I know, I'm not leaving it like that. I'll see what I can do with the legs without going over the top. give me a few days and there will be more pics.
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| The Witchhunter ![]() | take it easy mate, no one is having a go, and you did ask for C&C. these guys just don't want to see something like that overshadow what is an absolutely stunning peice of work.
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| Corporal ![]() ![]() | I'm not having a go I'm telling you that I know the problemYou know what it's like when someone tells you the same thing 3 times when you heard them the first, right?
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| Corporal ![]() ![]() | Ok, One leg is beefed up, and I have to admit it looks a little cooler, give me another 'slow' day and I'll have done the other. Both the arm pad and sword have been done too. Next update will have him primed and ready for last minute changes ![]()
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Blog Entries: 1 | sounds good but dont forget the cardinal rule. can we see him before you primer with the changes?? provide hairy pics to prevent being struck by heretic hammer, or erus's stick etc oh and dont forget to distract hairy with plenty of ![]() ![]()
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| Corporal ![]() ![]() | Of course, that's no problem. Let me get some batteries in my camera and I'll be good to go
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Blog Entries: 5 | Very cool, can't wait to see the updated Version. And i take it you've Taken inspiration form D_C to start this Project?
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