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Blog Entries: 4 |  Re: Final Colour: 6 Base: 0 Atmosphere: 6 Technique: 6 Overall Skill: 6 Unit Cohesion: 7 Your Comments: Nice choice of colours but a quick once over to clean up the armour and detailing would have gone a long way.
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 | Re: Final Colour 5 Base 0 Atmosphere 4 Technique 5 Overall Skill 4 Unit Cohesion 5 Your Comments you could've tidied them up a bit
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| Re: Final Colour: 5 Base: 0 Atmosphere: 6 Technique: 5 Overall Skill: 5 Unit Cohesion: 6 They needed a little more. I guess tightening up the paint is my best description of what I want to say.
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| Re: Final Colour: 8 Base: 2 Atmosphere: 6 Technique: 5 Overall Skill: 5 Unit Cohesion: 4 (couldnt tell they were in the same squad) Your comments: i like themn but they looked like a bunch of guys who got together to go out not a unit that fights together
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 | Re: Final Colour - 6.5 Base - 1 (You have a base at least, but nothing on it!) Atmosphere - 7 Technique - 5.5 Overall Skill - 6 Unit Cohesion - 7 Your Comments - Not terrible but with a bit more attention to detail You'll improve greatly. The Squad fits pretty well together besides the Plasma gunner, he seems a bit out of place with the yellow, although a nice effect. Once again not a bad entry but could have been better with more presicion. Keep at it though and you'll get better. BvL
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| Re: Final color 6 base 0 atmosphere 6.5 technique 5.5 overall 6 unit cohesion 6 comments The models base color is fine, but than the colors went all over and just needs some cleaning up.
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Blog Entries: 1 | Re: Final Color 7 Base 0 Atmosphere 6 Technique 6 Overall Skill 7 Unit Cohesion 8 Your Comments Just clean 'em up, a few more coats in a few places, base them and you're golden!
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 | Re: Final Color 6 Base 0 Atmosphere 6 Technique 7 Overall Skill 6 Unit Cohesion 5 Your Comments Try cleaning up the edges or at that Ink it will help abit. I did like the XP face it made me laugh
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