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| The Phoenician    Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Louisville, KY
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Blog Entries: 3     |  Bran Redmow, Bloody-Handed Warrior Just a teaser.. I'm re-writing the old epic Space Wolf poem, this time on the 12th Great Company Wolf Lord, Bran Redmow. http://www.ehow.com/how_3334_write-epic-poem.html . For those of you interested, this is the basics of writing an epic poem in generic form. It goes a lot deeper than that when you really research it, but that gives you the cookie cutter format of what is to vaguely come.
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| On The Warpath!    Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: As a figment of my own deranged imagination, i don't actually exist anywhere. Or London, UK.
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Blog Entries: 1 | i for one will be watching this like a hawk!
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| The Phoenician Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Louisville, KY
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Damn Norse!
__________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. That which causes us trials shall yield us triumph, and that which makes our hearts ache shall fill us with gladness. For the only true happiness is to learn, to advance and to improve. None of this could happen without rejecting error, ignorance, and imperfection. We must pass out of the darkness to reach the light.' - The Primarch Fulgrim, Attainment of Perfection Tutorials: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. | |
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| The Great Wolf    Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: BFE Kentucky
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| LOL...yeah but we're talkin Space Wolves here lad...not some ****hin blonde pfta wearin a skirt under his chest plate...these ain't the ruddy Rainbow Astartes...So you better get er right...cuz we got our eyeballs on ya teh make sure
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| The Phoenician Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Louisville, KY
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Blog Entries: 3 | Hence why it is taking a while. I need to find my copy of beowulf, or an older copy. good reference.
__________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. That which causes us trials shall yield us triumph, and that which makes our hearts ache shall fill us with gladness. For the only true happiness is to learn, to advance and to improve. None of this could happen without rejecting error, ignorance, and imperfection. We must pass out of the darkness to reach the light.' - The Primarch Fulgrim, Attainment of Perfection Tutorials: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. |
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Blog Entries: 3 | Listen now, to the Wolf! Hear his howl, and follow! The beast within become the beast without Hear now, the names of your champions And praise them, Noble sons of Russ! (what follows here is to be expanded, but is like an honor roll of current famous Space Wolves. Each will eventually be expanded to be the same length as Brans as I learn more on them, and will cover all 12 Wolf Lords and more!) Logan Grimnar, The Old Wolf - indomitable leader of the years Long of tooth and grey of beard Cunning beyond all wit and measure Fierce foe of red-handed rage Merciful lord of reason The hand of Russ upon him Destiny betwixt calloused paws (that's all I got! lol.. small spurt of inspiration!) Bjorn the Fell Handed - Immortal Champion of Russ forever! Ragnar Blackmane - The fire in the Fangs heart! Ulrik the Slayer- Warden and guard to the young and old! Njal Stormcaller - Master of the runes and Caller of Fenris' fury! Bran Redmow, bloody-handed warrior, He piles the skulls of his enemies, He builds a mound of the fallen. His foes weep rivers of blood. In fire and rain of death he strides Mighty axe cleaving foe in twain With the howl of the wulfen in his soul His warriors rend the foe to bone and marrow Fortress tall and foes mighty Quake and fail at the sight Of warriors arrayed in such plate With weapons like unto the Wolfs own! Bolt shell and frost tooth, claw and fang All fall before the might of the Twelfth Lord All fall to his fury, and are fed to the beast within All fall to the Sons of Russ (this next will be at the end of the roll of the living heroes, since the wolves believe Russ alive, and be obviously longer and more intricate as I expand my knowledge of Russ fluff wise) Russ, Mightiest of all the Emperors Sons. Father of the Legion, Master of the Fang Disciple of the Emperor Benevolent Master of the beast within Father of the beast without, Giver of the cursed mark (what follows and would be here will require research, but will be taken form my own fluff and official fluff, stating the names of fallen Space Wolves of fame and how they fell, much like with the current heroes). Mourn now, for the fallen! Sing now, their praises Sons of Fenris! Drain the drinking horn for the lost Thirteenth And stand in honor of the victorious dead! Learn then, the names of your Lords and Masters! Learn then, their ways and the way of Father Russ! Onwards, Men of Fenris! Onwards, Children of Russ! Onwards to the heart of battle, and glory of victory! ONWARDS SPACE WOLVES! *the speaker would then stamp foot down hard (in power armor this would have an efect) and slam the haft of his weapon (i'm thinking spear/staff) to the floor or some such surface then raise the weapon in the air to salute all present* So.. There's the rough format/inspiration.. Suddenly struck randomly late at night, which means no sleep for me. Hope you guys enjoy the preview, and any information you have would be welcome!
__________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. That which causes us trials shall yield us triumph, and that which makes our hearts ache shall fill us with gladness. For the only true happiness is to learn, to advance and to improve. None of this could happen without rejecting error, ignorance, and imperfection. We must pass out of the darkness to reach the light.' - The Primarch Fulgrim, Attainment of Perfection Tutorials: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Last edited by Lord Commander Erus; 10-13-2007 at 06:25 AM. |
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__________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. That which causes us trials shall yield us triumph, and that which makes our hearts ache shall fill us with gladness. For the only true happiness is to learn, to advance and to improve. None of this could happen without rejecting error, ignorance, and imperfection. We must pass out of the darkness to reach the light.' - The Primarch Fulgrim, Attainment of Perfection Tutorials: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. | |
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__________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. That which causes us trials shall yield us triumph, and that which makes our hearts ache shall fill us with gladness. For the only true happiness is to learn, to advance and to improve. None of this could happen without rejecting error, ignorance, and imperfection. We must pass out of the darkness to reach the light.' - The Primarch Fulgrim, Attainment of Perfection Tutorials: To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. | |
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| This sounds like everything I would expect it to be! Great work so far!
__________________ To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. Lord of Fluff and Blood Angels Herald of Nurgle "I wield my power with the Emperor's Authority. Those who would say that I am 'radical' merely have minds too small and impotent to realize all the weapons at their disposal. Do not question my methods on account of these so-called 'Puritans'." -Inquisitor Mathias Rosenadel |
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| The Great Wolf Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: BFE Kentucky
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| Brah you have way too much time on yer hands....LOL...Excellant work...may make a wolf or rune priest of you yet...carry on skaald
__________________ I am Wolfpack, my fangs are long, my hair grey with age...I am The Great Wolf...I fight with bolter and Axe, my armies vast, my word final. A true son of Russ, my honor above all, I hunt the heretic, the xenos, and the witch and slay them where they stand! To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. My sons hunt our enemies, slay them where they falter and bring their pelts to Fenris To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 10 or greater. You currently have 0 posts. |
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