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| Conscript   Join Date: Sep 2007
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|  Empyrean: Another poem Empyrean Limitless empyrean But for a glimpse, so many would kill Just to get their fill. Foolish mortals Gladly, freely, and unthinking They open their portals, And what they see is far worse than heretical chortles. Demons, gods, into evil sinking Whirling about in an endless storm. Not what these fops anticipated, nothing of gladness, of form No, just a means into a limitless fall Into the depths of madness For the empyrean consumes all.
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01-19-2008
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| The Phoenician   Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Louisville, KY
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| One of strangess   Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Turn around... (if I'm not there I'm usually in Bangladesh)
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Mosquito, how I hate thine bite! Thou comest in the darkness of the night Under my net* how dare thou fly, Inside my net, thou shalt die! Fever, thou bring Oh for blood thy sing! My legs hast become red, As I sleep in mine bed Swatting and slapping, And even zapping**, For thoust hast disturbed my sleep Thou foul, evil creep! Mosquito, how I hate thine bite! Thou comest in the darkness of the night Under my net how dare thou fly, Inside my net, thou shalt die! NOTES: *: In Bangladesh, because of the huge amount of mosquitoes, in order to have a good sleep, people sleep within mosquito nets. **: Once again, because of the large amount of mosquitoes, my family, and various other families, have electric mosquito zappers that look like a small tennis racket. When a mosquito flies through this “zapper” it is zapped… electric popping and even the smell of burnt mosquito fill the air! edit: forgot to say... but very nice poem!
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