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Old 10-13-2006   #1 (permalink)
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Imperial Date: M42.125-2
Type: Military Records-Confidential
Area: 42nd parallel Doft Region


It has come to my attention that the men are growing more and more restless. We have yet to see a full out battle. It is with my greatest hope that we can push the enemy off the face of this planet before the planet’s bicentennial. I have decided to keep records of my sorties, as should all good Field Marshall. Let me first start by introducing myself. I am Field Marshall 2nd Grade Wilhelm, in charge of Army Group B. And it has been my soul duty to see that the orkish horde be cleanse from the planet, so that the civilians could live here in peace, and purity.


Our first encounter with the sly enemy was in the small village of Nitek. We rested and rearmed in Nitek before we can make our approach to the Hive City of BlassFur. It must have been around noon when the staff sergeant’s voice rang out warning us of a raid. Sure enough a slew of orks armed with blunt axes and crude guns came out of the jungles. It was at that moment I ducked into my command tank. However my attendant
staff was not present, for they were in the mess hall getting with meal. I closed the hatch but didn’t seal it. At that moment I heard knockings on the door, and then the voice of one of my staff members. I quickly opened the door to ensure safety to my men. Bullets were being fired at the hatch as I tried to open it. As I peaked my head out to survey the field I saw First Lieutenant Graves right next to me.

“Sir, we got to get out of here, the orks ambushed us, Graves shouted over the loud chatter of machine gun fire. “We can stop them sir they have no anti tank.”

Sure enough they didn’t, for it would be my tank that would be hit with rockets and torched missiles. The orks always liked to shoot at the “shinier ‘umans” as those creatures would put it. I decided to mobilize the armour korp before the orks would realize the mistake they made. These orks were very feral which was unusually for their breed on the planet. I could only predict that reinforcements would arrive at any moment. I had to act quickly.



*******Im at a writers block so more is yet to come*******
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So far so good, sounds great and unique, with some of your SL style ofcourse. Keep it up, and try to think of an overall plot or what not, I am pretty sure you can continue this story.

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Yea Im trying to get it as like a "captain's log" from all those star treks, but its hard to word it correctly.
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