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Old 01-19-2008   #1 (permalink)
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Some questions for you all.

If you want to be involved (As a character, I'm too deep now for writing help, sorry!) please tell me your preferred race here, and races you'd hate to be.

Baron von Lexus, can you give me a full organization chart, or description, of the 501st Death Korps? Cheers.

Erus, I need fluff for your Grand Company of EC, and squad make-up, etc.

Also, I need people to be cannon fodder (Sorry, but people die in the grim darkness of the far future). Tell me if you don't mind.
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Should I just post it here? or would you want me to PM it to you. And I'm happy to see that the 501st will be featured more extensively than I first thought in this.

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Well, I'm thinking of making the 501st the staple of the fleet the main characters will travel with.

And post it, please. I don't want to lose it accidentally in my PM inbox, I regularly clear it out
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Allright it's on the way.
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Cheers, Baron.
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I'd be imperial, but only if I could die gloriously saving my battle brethren. Other than that, let me die a traitor's death, Chaos ftw!
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Ok here goes tell me if you need anything more:

501st Death Korps of Krieg ‘Isenherz’/ ‘Isenblut’

501st Death Korps Commander: Lord Militant Baron Jürgen Ulrich von Lexus
’Isenherz’ Divisional Commander: Field Marshall Sigismund von Höhenstaufen
’Isenblüt’ Divisional Commander: Orden Marshall Ortwinus ”The Saint“ von Munich


Isenherz Division:
Große Kompanie = 10 Infantry Kompanies
Infantry Kompanie = 10 Infantry Platoons
Infantry Platoon = 4-8 Infantry Squads
Infantry Squad = 10 Soldiers


Total Operational Strength:
5 Große Kompanies
50 Infantry Kompanies
500 Infantry Platoons
4,000 Infantry Squads
Total: 40,000 Soldiers


Actual Operational Strength:
5 Große Kompanies
50 Infantry Kompanies
448 Infantry Platoons
3,584 Infantry Squads
Total: 35,638 Soldiers


Isenblüt Division:
Siege Kompanie = 15 Große Batteries
Große Battery = 8-10 Artillery Batteries
Artillery Battery = 1-3 Guns
Gun = Gun and Crew


Assault Kompanie = 10 Tank Kompanies and 2-4 Super Heavy Detachments
Tank Kompanie = 5-10 Tank Squadrons
Tank Squadron = 3 Tanks
Tank = Tank and Crew
Super Heavy Detachment = 3 Super Heavy Class Tanks and Crew


Total Operational Strength:
8 Siege Kompanies
120 Große Batteries
1200 Artillery Batteries
3600 Guns
3 Krieg Pattern Super Heavy Self Propelled Siege Mortar “Gustav”


6 Assault Kompanies
24 Super Heavy Detachments (18 Baneblade, 42 Macharius, 3 Shadowsword, 3 Stormhammer, 3 Hellhammer)
60 Tank Kompanies
600 Tank Squadrons
1800 Tanks


Actual Operational Strength:
8 Siege Kompanies
118 Große Batteries
1180 Artillery Batteries
3540 Guns
3 Krieg Pattern Super Heavy Self Propelled Siege Mortar “Gustav”


6 Assault Kompanies
23 Super Heavy Detachments (18 Baneblades, 39 Macharius, 3 Shadowsword, 3 Stormhammer, 3 Hellhammer)
60 Tank Kompanies
586 Tank Squadrons
1758 Tanks


Raised on Krieg 248.M41 only 300 Years after the end of the Revolt of Krieg and Colonel Jurten’s famous victory, the 501st was raised by Munitorum Tithe from Hive Ferrograd, the loyalist base on Krieg during the revolt. The 501st has a long history throughout the 41st Millennium and has taken part in multiple crusades and many campaigns. The 501st fought with distinction during the 3rd War for Armageddon at Helsreach and Hades Hive during the darkest hours of the war. After the Armageddon campaign the army was brought back to full strength and attached to the Black Templars Lothar Kroh Crusade as the bulk of Kampfgruppe Edelweiss along with other Imperial regiments. The next major engagement was the Cleansing of Geist in the final days of M41. Requisitioned by Lord Inquisitor Baron Johann Dietrich von Lexus (Jürgen Ulrich von Lexus’s brother) as part of the Kroh Crusade the 501st was employed to return Geist to Imperial hands in less than a year. The next stop for the Kroh Crusade and the 501st was Medusa V. Operating under the command of the Lord Inquisitor once again; the Kroh Crusade played a vital role in the defense of Hive Sybilla Primus and Hydra zone as a whole. After the Imperial Victory on Medusa V the Kroh Crusade was dispatched to help reclaim the world of Valdenheim where they struggle to fight off Chaos, Orks, and Rebels.

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Ready and willing to Death Korp cannon fodder!

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Ack.. I'll dig up/link you to some of the fluff, and try to slap together an army list to give you an idea of the organization.
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Ohh Ya I forgot Commissars:

Colonel Commissar Heinrich von Möltke,
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Willing to be a traitor that you destroy utterly, ok?

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Thanks everyone.

If you have the stuff on file on your computer, Erus, you can send me it over msn next time I'm on.
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Is that pretty much what you wanted from me?
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I do, but been at me mum's house sitting Icarus. Will send or post sometime tonight.
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H-uh, well if Erus needs a devious but otherwise expendable lieutenant, I'm all for it. But other than that do as you see fit, its not like I own this name or anything.
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I have no idea if Im still a Heretic Inquisitor. But I'd be willing to take part as something. If im not an Inq. then I want my name to be Mikail Keutmann other wise I dont mind what i am.
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I'd Like to get in on this if theres still time. and BTW Icarus, i like the spin youve put on things up to now. makes for interesting, but good reading.

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I'll like to be in it, I'd prefer to be an ork (Warboss) and I'd like to survive this to be honest.
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You cant survive... The 501st hate orks... haha
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If there's room add me in the mix,I would like to live but if i gotta die i wanna go in style.
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Old 01-23-2008   #22 (permalink)
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Default Re: Help with the Novellette

Too tall even to ducked into the medicae

Since you mention him smashing into the medicae immediately afterwards, I'd try for a different wording here...

edit: that's all I can see in the triangulum thread for the minute. I'll go back to the original thread for the rest.
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Old 01-23-2008   #23 (permalink)
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